“First Pass Pages” of Tiger Tail Soup

by | Feb 14, 2014 | Art, China, writing | 27 comments

tigers2Tiger Tail Soup is almost ready for publication.

Earlier this week my publisher sent me what they call “First Pass Pages.” That means that my novel is almost ready to be printed. All I have to do now is go through it one more time in case there’s something we missed–a typo or maybe a misplaced word. The expectation is that at this late date, problems will be few and far between. Almost nonexistent.

So I sit down at my computer and read. Before long, I encounter problem number one. I want to rewrite. Even though the novel is finished and I’m satisfied with it, I see small changes I could make–a word here, a phrase there. But no, I tell myself. Stop fiddling with it.

So I read on, and after a while I encounter problem number two. I become lost in my own story. Strange to say, even though I know the story well, it still pulls me in. I’m afraid I’m not watching closely enough for commas and typos. So I sit back, take a breath, and read that page again.

It’s nighttime now, and I’ve read more than half the pages. When I finish, I’ll tell the publisher what I found. Then we’ll work together on the cover. Oh, my!

Paintings in a trunk

Before I even thought of writing Tiger Tail Soup, I painted some pictures related to the story.

At the top of the page you can see the painting that hangs in my dining room. It depicts a pair of tigers that wandered down from the mountains, swam across to Amoy, and were eventually killed and eaten–the choice cuts, by the Japanese soldiers who occupied Amoy; the leftovers, by the Chinese.

But there were other painting I’d forgotten. I found them last week, rolled up in a trunk in my basement. Here are two of them.

 

Ah Chew eating tiger tail soup

Ah Chew eating tiger tail soup

Ah Chew with goats

Ah Chew with goats

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27 Comments

  1. Jeri Hansen

    I am so excited to read your book. Loved reading your Archives. You have so much to tell of your life experiences. (From your neighbor a few door up)

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    • Nicki Chen

      Thank you, Jeri. In about a week or so I should receive a box of books. Then I have to plan a book party at the clubhouse.

      Reply
  2. Rita Vander Stoep

    Hi Nicki:
    That is wonderful news for you. I’m also wanting to get a copy of your book so be sure to keep us posted when it will be available. I love your stories.

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    • Nicki Chen

      Hi Rita. Yes, I’ll be sure to let you know when my book is available.

      Reply
  3. nrhatch

    Fantastic paintings, Nicki. And exciting news. 😀

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  4. evelyneholingue

    This must be so exciting for you, Nicky. The illustrations are gorgeous. Does it mean that your novel will be illustrated?

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    • Nicki Chen

      No, Evelyne, my novel won’t be illustrated. When I painted those, I was thinking of writing a children’s book.

      Reply
  5. chinaelevatorstories

    How exciting! That’s something I thought about recently – is there ever a time a writer will think a passage is perfect and doesn’t need to be changed anymore? This must be a hard decision, deciding when you’ve worked enough on the text. Looking forward to reading your book, I’m sure it will be written beautifully. Will it also be available as an ebook some time in the future? I do like hard copies, but with all the moving I have refrained from buying too many hard copies (still have a few boxes of books at my mother’s place).

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    • Nicki Chen

      Yes, Ruth. Tiger Tail Soup will be available not only as a paperback but also as an ebook.

      Reply
  6. katecrimmins

    How exciting for you! Can’t wait until it’s ready to the public!

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    • Nicki Chen

      It won’t be long now–another one and a half or two months.

      Reply
  7. Barb Shillinger

    I, too, see how you might want to “tweak” your final copy, Nikki. Is anything EVER perfect enough??!! No, probably not, but I will look forward to reading your book, too. I will get a (signed, please) copy for my husband LaMont, your fellow classmate, for a belated Valentine’s Day.gift. I am always late for everything–after 50 years, he’s used to it!!

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    • Nicki Chen

      Definitely, Barb. When it comes out, I’ll sign a copy for LaMont.

      Reply
  8. Maureen

    Hi Nicki, I can see your two dilemmas as you go back through your book. I can’t wait to have my own copy and read it through! Love these paintings too. You’re a very talented woman!

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    • Nicki Chen

      Thanks, Maureen. I should be able to sign a copy for you in about another month and a half.

      Reply
  9. Christine

    Those are great pictures! Are you going to be able to put them in the book? I love your drawings and paintings.

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    • Nicki Chen

      Sorry, Christine. I think it’s too late to add pictures to my book.

      Reply
  10. Paddy

    I know exactly what you mean about wanting to rewrite your ‘finished’ book. We authors love to pick at words and muse about images. Luckily publishers help us find contentment long enough to wrench the manuscript from our hands and create the book.

    Congrats, Nicki. Your book promises to be an exciting story!

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    • Nicki Chen

      Yes, Paddy. There comes a time when revisions must cease.

      Reply
  11. foreignsanctuary

    Congrats, Nicki! What an amazing feat to write a book! Kudos to you and I hope to one day read your masterpiece!!

    P.S: I know how it is. Sometimes I read blog entries published several months before only to find spelling and grammar mistakes! Good luck perfecting your book!

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    • Nicki Chen

      Thanks, Constance. Isn’t it nice for us that blog entries can be corrected even after they’ve been published?

      Reply

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